Headless-Chicken-Man's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Phun With Old People]

Not particularly "phunny". You got a play button and start screen down, there was a bit of sketchy animation on both the old man and the attacker. Nice if you could've made some walk cycles/backgrounds/sounds.
You get a star because the old man going down was fluid (and pretty much the best part) and also the shaky arm.
Everything else was poor. To be honest with you, even though it was short and stupid, if you'd put more time into the animation and stuff it may have passed for mildly amusing.
If you make something else, work harder before submitting.

Duds123 responds:

Thanks! Your review is greatly appreciated. I'll take your advice into consideration.

[skittles (short)]

Not really up to par.

I gave you half a star, because what little movement there was, actually moved.

jakesgalaxy responds:

yeah sorry i was busy with my family so i only had about 5 minutes to make this

[Blue Hippo Extravaganza!]

Errm.. no.

As mildly humorous as I found this...

No.

Just no. This isn't up to scratch in my personal and honest opinion.
Animation was.. ok..
Music was just a pain, so varied and like.. it's almost not worth it considering it takes like.. 20 seconds to read your "fun hippo facts"..
Art could use improvement, but that's just an experience thing, keep trying.
Interactivity was pretty good, given what it is.

I just plain don't like this enough, sorry.

I do feel there is a huge potential for hilarity and awesome conceptually though.
Random humour is always a winner.

Try again, work harder and good luck.

TheRuining responds:

The flash was made to inform the public about Blue Hippos and their living enviroment, that is all.

[Cartoon Series Preview]

Wahey!

This is crazy awesome.
You are right though, it's definitely not perfect, needs some tweeking.
But for a pilot, it certainly makes me want to see more. This. Must. Be. Made. It has promise by the truckload. The art is immense.
If I was gonna be critical, which I think I should be, so it can be perfecto. I would say that the sound needs a little bit of work, just a little quieter, maybe not so close to the mic, so there's no clippyness. I think the animation could be smoother, it may be my computer, may not, but it seems the tiniest bit choppy, little puppety, but it's alright as it is.
Humour, awesome. Just awesome, hope you keep it up.
I see this being a mighty successful venture. Wish my associates where of a similar calibre :P
Good luck, guys.

insertnamehere85 responds:

Thanks, I hope I can find the time to finish these episodes.

[Edible Castle #3]

AHAHA!

This actually had me properly laughing from the beginning, best episode by far!
Now you've set a challenge to keep the quality up for up coming episodes..

brilliant, just pure genius..
love the style the animation, but I mean all that is standard Mr. Arbuckle you are the pinnacle of animatory deitism..
The story sound and voices are all excellent as well Mr. Dennis is a genius and should be revered about the land, and many others also, you two are a great team...

I just hope that I myself could possibly achieve the levels of quality you consistently show through all your outputs, or at the very least be merely associated with something of this quality.. preferably the former..

My hat of to you sirs, well done..

.... too much? well I don't mind a bit of overkill if necessary..

EdibleCastle responds:

wow, u knew who did what, impressive!

[OwnageInTheFlesh [I/C]]

s'aight

It's not bad, but this really isn't the place for unfinished projects, or the reception of constructive criticism, this is possibly the worst place for that.. very few people here bother to give good solid constructive reviews, I always try to, and appreciate receiving them, anyway

I can see this gettin good, pretty smooth, there's a little something lacking though.. there's just.. something a little bit.. solid about it, I'm nt sure, but yea, graphics are pretty nice, works well, not a fan of the music, and as long as the real thing is much longer, and perhaps moves about a bit more, I would predict great things for this, it could get there, but it's not yet, keep workin.

DB-Anims responds:

thanks alot, dude. this was actually an old project i ditched. im going to continue working on it now that i have learned new techniques and a "fluider" way to animate. Hope to see more comments from u on later animations!
-FB

[Fighting 'Till Dawn]

Not bad, but...

I have to say, that "dance" was much better than this, 'part from the stillness of the base, it moved less in this one. I suggest, that you secure the board very well, and also the camera, that way, yo won't get the animation jumping, for the turns you should move the camera, not the base, and perhaps you could build a sort of mini room, so that you can take one wall off to get the shot, but you don't get speedy images of your desk and person moving in the background... just my thoughts. Good stuff though, keep on goin up!

ThorKingOfTheVikings responds:

Thanks for the review, Yes I agree, dancing IS better, but whatever. You have better flash than me so I cant show you off lol. Thanks for the review!

-yoddtacos.

[x DEATH x]

Powerful stuff

That was good, I quite liked it, I can see your stuff getting better in the future.. keep it up, your going places..

Halph-price responds:

Best first review, ever. thanks you. i am glad you didn't think it to violent, but for interactivity a 0? i made that replay button, and you didn't ahve to click on the individual letters themselves, like n00bs do. the special Hit Slate.

just think of that next time you rate interactivity. ;)

[Who Goes There? Part 1]

Cool!

I thought tht was pretty good, can definatly be a series, although i must say tht the movements where a little slow, for an action/horror toon, maybe up the frame rate a little...

GrimEntertainment responds:

Note taken, I keep it in mind for the next parts and thanks glad you liked it!

[Overseers 1]

could b improved

needs a little work otherwise gr8! choppy animation, but graphics aren't too bad could work on some of them... better sound mebe and omg finally a preloader gd 4 u, c all u ppl he gets it!!

synsacrum responds:

yeah the preloader for the other one was kinda jacked up, but thanks for the comments and advice